GLS W.I.P Page one

As promised by the journal entry, this is a w.i.p. (work in progress)/very early version of a page from the revised prologue.  As one can see, there's no dialogue, little to no shading or much backgrounds (not there's going to be since these are mostly face shots with a hint of drama) and very basic toning.  As you may see in this very early build, I intend to exact a style that utilizes celshading (as well as fully fleshed - out digital painting) and screen tones, a look I feel falls in line with the kind of story GLS will be (as opposed to everything being heavily inked or hyper - realistic).  Though I do feel that the comic will aim more towards a realistic look then some of the art I've already churned out.  The characters are the "supposed" antagonist: to be referred to as Dusk Manger (the guy on the phone with the huge grin) and another main character/ protagonist, Akira (also referred to as Rynem).