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GLS: The Main Trio

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The three main GLS characters from left to right. I'd name them but their names are already beneath them. :) They are to be featured in GLS sequence 0-1, chapter one to my comic which is going to be hosted on mangamagazine.net. A link to my profile: [link]
FB Page: [link]

News regarding GLS (UPDATE May 5th, 2013): I've finished storyboarding the prologue and it will total up to 17 pages excluding the cover. I aim to get it done by next week, though there's no guarantee. Again, it will be hosted on mangamagazine.net once finished so keep a look out!

Also, I'll be uploading the original works separately in some time.

FEEDBACK PLEASE: I intend to use this or variant forms of this piece in future promotions for GLS, so I would I appreciate it if anyone could give me a feedback whether this would be optimal eye-candy when it comes to advertising/introducing the story (say, if this were to be feature in a video/pamphlet where I go over the characters). Is it too simple? Too complex? Easy on the eyes? Your honest feelings, thank you!

All characters are owned by me, Akaraah (Kiam Shaton Whitfield)

Tools used to create this piece:
Colors! 3D (Nintendo 3DS)
Sketch book pro 6 (Macintosh/Windows)
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© 2013 - 2024 Akaraah
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Its good to hear from you again friend! I'm ecstatic that you're getting your dream done! Must be a wonderful feeling. Sorry I haven't replied to our lengthy conversation, I'm going to try to gather up the will to respond in full to your message. I think the subject is still alive.

My honest opinion of this piece is that it's a great concept but probably a bit too plain. I like the face shots in virtue that they're in different angles. However, the mug shots could be a bit more dynamic; a scene from behind the head or one that is a worms-eye-view, but nothing too drastic. I think the color could probably be lighter in value to make it more vibrant. Lastly, I think better lettering could due though I'm a fan of simplicity. These are my humble opinions. I'll tell you though, I like the style... it seems, old-school for lack of better terms. Its very appreciative, reminds me of a Wanted poster lol. Great job friend. All of this done, no less, on the DS.